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Monday, 3 August 2015

Ari And The Pizza

LI:  Analyse text to identify Ethos, Pathos and Logos.
Persuasive Reading Analysis: Ari and the pizza
Take another look at the persuasive piece of reading/ writing.
What strategies does the author use to try to persuade you?
Below are strategies writers often use for this form of writing.  Read through each
strategy and decide whether the author used that strategy by writing yes or no in the second column. If you write yes, then explain how the author used that strategy.
Persuasive strategy
Yes / No
How the author used it?
Claim – States the main  
point or stance
No
Ari says, Pizza’s are healthy!
Big Names –  Mentions experts and
important people to support the argument
No

Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or  
facts to support the argument
Yes
Ari said “All the food groups are in pizza”. Ari tells good facts about pizza, which shows that he has researched it.
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions
Yes
He told his mother that he loves pizza. He also knows that his mother is really tired and couldn’t cook so he told her to buy pizza.                                                                     
Ethos – Tries to build trust and
credibility
Yes
Ari knows that his mum is really tired and she couldn’t cook so he convince his mother to buy pizza. He also has a coupon and he is fair to his mother.
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency  
for the cause
No

Research – Uses studies and  
information to make the  
argument seem more convincing;  
this can be in the form of words,
graphs, tables, or illustrations
Yes
Ari researched about the pizza and decided to convince his mother to buy pizza.

2 Timothy 4:6-7

LI: Use the steps of Lectio Divina to reflect on scripture

Ko te Ratu 2 o te Hongongoi teni ra

This morning scripture from 2 Timothy 4:6-8 was about how we can live our lives. Paul was in person and very lonely he missed Timothy and his friends. Paul was grateful that he had live a full life. He thought this life was about to end. Indications are they he was strong in faith.

The word faith tells me that I have to care about the people that I love and what I respect also to the people that are very important to me and everybody. Also it means to me that I had to thank the people for what have they done for me because they me and care about me.

Two of a Kind

LI: Identify ethos pathos and logos
Persuasive Reading Analysis:
Take another look at the persuasive piece of reading/ writing.
What strategies does the author use to try to persuade you?
Below are strategies writers often use for this form of writing.  Read through each
strategy and decide whether the author used that strategy by writing yes or no in the second column. If you write yes, then explain how the author used that strategy.
Persuasive strategy
Yes / No
How the author used it?
Claim – States the main  
point or stance
Yes
The first part of the clip offers with a single perspective that ants are worthless and useless to the world
Big Names –  Mentions experts and
important people to support the argument
No
There were no mentioning of any major or famous names in this clip.
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or  
facts to support the argument
Yes
The Ant presents a number of facts about why she should not be squashed. “We take chips because one whole chip can feed a whole colony”

The boy argues with the ant and gives more facts as to why he should squash the ant.
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions
Yes
The Boy bullies the ant and threatens to squash it. The ant was helpless and thought the boy was intimidating.                                                                              
Ethos – Tries to build trust and
credibility
No

Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency  
for the cause
No

Research – Uses studies and  
information to make the  
argument seem more convincing;  
this can be in the form of words,
graphs, tables, or illustrations
Yes
The boy tells facts about ants and what they do.

Thursday, 30 July 2015

Psalms 4:5 - A reflection by Michael

Ko te Rahina 27 o te Hongongoi teni ra
Scripture Reference Psalms 4:5


We are practising our listening skills and practising uses the skills associated with
Lectino Davina a form of reflection on prayer introduced by Saint Benedict.


“Lead me O Lord in your righteousness because of my enemies; make your way straight before me”.

When I thought about the scripture that what read, I thought about how if I had a terrible time in my life, God will help me.

Wednesday, 29 July 2015

Breakfast

WALHT: Analyse text to identify examples of ethos, pathos and logos.
Persuasive Reading Analysis: Breakfast
Take another look at the persuasive piece of reading/ writing.
What strategies does the author use to try to persuade you?
Below are strategies writers often use for this form of writing.  Read through each
strategy and decide whether the author used that strategy by writing yes or no in the second column. If you write yes, then explain how the author used that strategy.
Persuasive strategy
Yes / No
How the author used it?
Claim – States the main  
point or stance
Yes
The Author said “Not having breakfast changes your mood or the way you think”. The Author has a main point in say that breakfast is the most important meal of the day.
Big Names –  Mentions experts and
important people to support the argument
No
The Author never said something about people.
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or  
facts to support the argument
Yes
It says that “ Without breakfast you lack energy and it’s harder to concentrate”. The Author tells us that a person can become weak and get sick.
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions
No
The Author never used emotions.                                                                               
Ethos – Tries to build trust and
credibility
Yes
It says that “Having this meal gives you the strength and energy for the school day ahead of you”. The Author talks more information and facts.
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency  
for the cause
No

Research – Uses studies and  
information to make the  
argument seem more convincing;  
this can be in the form of words,
graphs, tables, or illustrations
Yes
The Author researched facts about how healthy are breakfast.

Friday, 24 July 2015

Homework should be banned

Persuasive Reading Analysis:
Take another look at the persuasive piece of reading/ writing.
What strategies does the author use to try to persuade you?
Below are strategies writers often use for this form of writing.  Read through each
strategy and decide whether the author used that strategy by writing yes or no in the second column. If you write yes, then explain how the author used that strategy.
Persuasive strategy
Yes / No
How the author used it?
Claim – States the main  
point or stance
Yes
The Author said “Sitting around for hours doing homework is dreadfully unhealthy”. The Author tells us a reason why homework should be banned.
Big Names –  Mentions experts and
important people to support the argument
No

Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or  
facts to support the argument
Yes
The Author says that “Sitting around for hours doing homework is dreadfully healthy”. The author’s phrase has a point.
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions
No
                                                                               
Ethos – Tries to build trust and
credibility
Yes
The Author said “Kids work hard at school all day so they need to relax and refresh their brains”. The Author tells us facts and evidence from it.
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency  
for the cause
No

Research – Uses studies and  
information to make the  
argument seem more convincing;  
this can be in the form of words,
graphs, tables, or illustrations
No








Persuasive Writing

Junior Playgrounds Should Be Removed from Schools

Walht: Use ethos,pathos and logos to persuade people

I believe all Junior playgrounds should be banned so that junior students will be able to work hard and play in a less time.

The first reason why I want to banned junior playgrounds is because some students just come to school to play around. School playgrounds can make students lazy, irresponsible and just muck around.

The second reason is that some students don’t care about their school work, they are more interested to play in the playground instead of finishing their work.

Third reason is that it can make the students do bad things in the playground and keep them as secrets. They can fight with one another, bully other kids and they don’t show good examples to others.

Finally my last reason is that playgrounds can be an unsafe area to play. It may cause students accidents, injuries that can cause brain damage and ultimately, can cause death to students. Students can die from other things while playing in the  playgrounds.

So that’s why I strongly suggest that playgrounds should be BANNED!